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« Thread Started on Apr 16, 2003, 9:24pm » | |
Chapter 1: The New Girl
*Squall and Rinoa walk down to the parking lot* (balab garden)
Rinoa:I'll be gone for two weeks
Squall : ok
*Selphie and Quistis are already in the car*
Selphie & Quistis: Come on Rinoa lets go!!
Rinoa : ok! Bye Squall! *she runs off and gets in the car and they drive away*
*Zell walks up to Squall*
Zell: Yo Squall wanna grab some hotdogs??
Squall:Sure
*Zell and Squall start walking to the cafeteria and Squall bumps into a girl and she falls down*
Squall:Rinoa?? (no she can't be rinoa she is on vacation)
Chapter 2: Squall Meets Trouble
*the girl gets up with the help of squall*
Squall:Are you ok?
The Girl:Yeah i'm fine (he is so cute i wonder what his name is)
Zell: Come on Squall! or we won't get any hotdogs!!
Squall : Ok *he walks off with zell with the girl watching behind*
The Girl: so squalls his name...
*they enter the cafeteria*
Zell:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!THE HOTDOGS ARE ALL GONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*they sit down at a table*
Squall:That girl looked almost like rinoa...
Zell: yeah she does
*Irvine comes over to them with a crowd of girls*
Irvine:Hey Squall have you met the new girl heard her name was Celtic
Squall : Oh cool. I'm not that hungry i'm gonna go to the dorms
Zell & Irvine:Bye Squall!
*Squall walks down to the dorms once he gets there he spots Celtic waiting for him at his dorm*
Squall:Celtic??
Chapter 3:Rinoa's Troubles
*Rinoa,Quistis and Selphie as you know are on vacation they have had a fun day at the beach and decided to go to a bar to have some fun*
Quistis:come on rinoa! i'm sure squall doesn't mind if you have some fun and dance with someone
Rinoa:i'm not sure i mean most of the guys here are drunk
*Selphie is dancing with some guy*
Selphie: Come on rinoa its fun!!
Quistis:all right suite yourself *she goes off and starts dancing with some guy*
*A man half drunk walks over to rinoa*
The Man:Hi you look lonly
Rinoa:yeah...
The Man:Whuts your name?
Rinoa:its Rinoa
The Man:well i'm Dan do ya wanna dance?
Rinoa: um...ok...
*Dan and Rinoa begin to dance but then theres trouble Dan begins to act like shes his girlfriend*
Chapter 4: Rinoa,Quistis,and Selphie Fight
*Rinoa knees Dan in the stomach and then Punches him in the face and Runs for the Door*
Dan:BITCH!!!!
*Dans Friends run after rinoa but Quistis trips one and Selphie smacks the other across the face and they follow Rinoa*
*they hop in their car and drive off*
Quistis:Rinoa!
Rinoa:i'm sorry i didn't like what he was doing to me
Selphie:Its ok now
Rinoa:i'm NEVER going to a bar again
*They arrive at their Hotel and get changed into there night outfits Rinoa Turns on the radio*
Rinoa : Oh i looooove this song!! *She turns it up and starts singing along with her brush as a microphone and selphie joins along*
Quistis:HAHA If only Squall could see you two!!
*They all start cracking up*
Meanwhile back at the garden Celtic won't stay away from squall she tries kissing him and she acts like she is his girlfriend finally she gets a kiss from him squall sits in his dorm thinking
Squall:{why did that feel so good...}*he snaps out of it*
Squall:I HAVE A GIRLFRIEND!!! *he says to himself*
Chapter 5:The Nightmare
"Your Princess is Hurt! The Angels blood look at yourself your drenched in her blood"
*Squall woke up in a jolt he had been hearing the same words over and over ever since he had kissed celtic*
*Celtic walked in to his room it was early dawn*
Celtic:Hey Squall
Squall:hi...
Celtic:Whats wrong?
Squall:i Have a girlfriend...her name is rinoa
Celtic: (Rinoa?? thats my sisters name maybe thats her??nah! thats a popular name it could be anybody)
*Celtic began to kiss squall then the phone rang Squall went to answer it*
Squall:Hello
Rinoa:Hi Squall!
Squall:Hey! (Thats right rinoa's suppose to come back today!)
Rinoa:i Called to tell you that i'm staying for another week ok?
Squall: k...
Rinoa: bye squall
Squall: bye
Rinoa:*to selphie and quistis* Are you sure i should be doing this i really hate to lie to him
Quistis:if you wanna know if he isn't cheating on you you have to do this
Rinoa: Ok...
Celtic:Who was that
Squall: My Girlfriend
Celtic : Oh
*Squall and Celtic walked out of the door and Celtic decided to give him a goodbye kiss Quistis and Selphie were standing behind Rinoa watching*
Chapter 6: UnHappy Rinoa
*Quistis and selphie were staring at squall wide mouthed while him and Celtic were kissing*
Rinoa:Squall
*Squall sees rinoa and stops kissing Celtic*
Squall:Rinoa!! you weren't suppose to be back till next week!
Quistis:The boyfriend test...and you were cheating on her!!
Rinoa:i cant belive you!!!!
I Trusted you!!!!!!!!!! You said you would never break my heart!! Well squall, you did!!! Now i'm gonna Kill that little princess of yours *Rinoa casted Thunderaga on Celtic*
Celtit:*ZAP!**She Ran to get her sword*
Chapter 7: demolished Garden
*Rinoa was on a rampage killing everything and everyone in her path she was gonna kill squall and celtic*
Squall:Rinoa!! Stop!!!
Rinoa:NO!! *she walks up to Squall* Am i just your Bitch to have around!!!! and when you get tired of me or i decide to go on vacation you get a new Bitch!!!
Sir Caraway:Rinoa! Can i talk to you?
*The garden was compleatly destroyed when her father got there she decided to let him talk they went into Rinoa's Room and then Celtic came in following*
Rinoa:Whats that BITCH doing in here i want her out!!!!
Caraway:Rinoa this is your sister
Rinoa:NO!!! she can't be i don't have a sister!!!
Caraway:Let me Explain she is your half sister
Rinoa: you didn't!!! i can't belive you Cheated on my mother for hers!!!
Caraway:heres the story....i was married you your mother rinoa and we had you after you were about 9 months old Celtic was born so i got thrown out of your house and i lived with Celtics Family till They found out i had been with another family while celtic was born and not just any family a soceress family so i got thrown out again...and now i live in a great big mansion
Rinoa:I can't belive you or squall!!!! your both just cheaters!!!!!!!! i hate you and him!!!!!!!
Celtic:it wasn't squalls fault...me and him were just friends and i decided to kiss him and things led on from that...
*outside squall was talking to irvine*
Irvine:I told you she would get hurt and if her father wasn't here then Celtic would probally have to kill her...and then you would be in her blood wanting her alive.
Squall: (Angels Blood=Rinoa?? Princess hurt=Celtic)
Irvine:i've had it happen before i was dating a girl that looks an awful lot like Celtic and her cousin Laura i don't remember her name but i loved Laura and i went over to Lauras house and they were both there and found out i was cheating on them...
Squall:I've got to go talk to Rinoa...
*Squall Began to walk down the destroyed hallway to rinoa's room*
Chapter 8: Friend or Foe?
*Rinoa ran out of her room and saw squall*
squall:Rinoa! can i talk to you?
Rinoa:Why don't you talk to your new girl friend
Squall:Because i love my old one!
*She looked at squall suprised he would say that with everyone watching*
Rinoa:Celtic is my sister...
Squall:*His eyes widen* your sister i thought she looked an awful lot like you
Rinoa:Half sister really...caraway did the same thing to my mom as you did to me but much worse
*celtic saw irvine and her eyes got bigger*
Celtic:You!!!!Your the one that killed Laura!!!!
Irvine:Celtic i'm sorry i really loved your cousin...i didn't mean to kill her
Celtic:i don't belive you!
Irvine:you should!!!
Chapter 9: Good Ending?
*Rinoa and Squall are back together and Irvine and selphie are a couple. After Irvine explained to Celtic that he didn't mean to kill her cousin she forgave him. Celtic and Zell had became a nice couple and Quistis was left out of the couples party*
Quistis:*sigh* why if only i hade a boyfriend i'd be having fun with them at the party
*Seifer walked up to Quistis*
Seifer:Why so sad Instructor?
Quistis:I can't go to the Couples party and have fun with the rest of my friends...
Seifer:Well...i wouldn't say that...*Seifer and Quistis went to seifers Room to Talk*
THE END
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