Joined: Jul 2002 Gender: Female Posts: 33 Location: In the Shadows
My Poetry « Thread Started on Jul 28, 2002, 12:20pm »
I've only recently started writing poetry, but I've been told I'm pretty decent, so I'll post some of mine. Please tell me what you think! Just a warning, but many of mine tend to be depressing.
Flaming Hope
From the flames of Fate Emerald eyes ablaze with hate Shrieking defiance at the evil That has caused a great upheaval The giant rises from ancient slumber A wise and powerful defender
Wings of fire, talons of gold Beautiful and bold Flaming feathers of every hue Of red and green, orange and blue
The glowing shadow spreads the light A beacon of hope, burning bright All who see it knows it’s true The Phoenix rises To serve the Justice due
Dragon, Dragon
Dragon, Dragon Flying free Diving, soaring Twisting, turning Graceful as could ever be
Dragon, Dragon Flying free Glittering scales Gleaming claws Always ready to defend your cause
Dragon, Dragon Flying free With spirit unbroken And pure of heart Defending friends without second thought
Dragon, Dragon Flying free A marvel to watch An honor to know The great Wind Lords of old
Dragon, Dragon Flying free Come and visit Close to me
Silent Suffering
Fallen far from hope and light No one knows my private fight Each day I find myself sunk deeper My life is that of a mindless sleeper
I fight with all my heart and soul But every battle takes a toll My eyes glisten from unshed tears There's no one to dispel my fears
Alone I wander in the night Deep within a hopeless plight Not yet, not ever can I find rest Forever lost is my heart's solace
Joined: Jul 2002 Gender: Female Posts: 506 Location: The Forgotten City
Re: My Poetry « Reply #3 on Jan 10, 2004, 11:29am »
Aww... that is so sweet.... I wanted to cry, I really did.... it reminded me of my exb/f.... I still haven't accepted that he lied to me... I really don't want to... but that was a truely moving poem... please post more whenever you can ^_^